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« on: October 27, 2010, 09:24:51 PM »
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« Reply #1 on: October 27, 2010, 09:50:18 PM »
Wow....this is wild! i can feel the energy of youth in this...well done!
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« Reply #2 on: October 28, 2010, 08:15:27 AM »
certainly is a different type of shot.... really get a sense of movement and impatience!
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« Reply #3 on: October 28, 2010, 12:03:06 PM »
very different i like it
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« Reply #4 on: October 28, 2010, 01:58:43 PM »
Whilst I like the concept enormously Christoph, each time I look at the image I am drawn to the pedestrian's feet, which seem to me to be airborne. Not sure if he needed to be gravitated downwards or scaled down or something. Just my thoughts .
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« Reply #5 on: October 28, 2010, 04:24:52 PM »
Quote from: Carmyllie on October 28, 2010, 01:58:43 PM
Whilst I like the concept enormously Christoph, each time I look at the image I am drawn to the pedestrian's feet, which seem to me to be airborne. Not sure if he needed to be gravitated downwards or scaled down or something. Just my thoughts .
I didn't move the original figure at all.  However, by blurring the ground I must made it look like he is airborne.  I'll see if I can change this.
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« Reply #6 on: October 28, 2010, 05:31:41 PM »
I keep coming back as I can't decide if I like it or not!!!  Cheesy. Like the concept but find the floating effect a bit disconcerting as well!
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« Reply #7 on: October 28, 2010, 07:32:08 PM »
Here he is on terra firma.  Better?

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« Reply #8 on: October 29, 2010, 01:56:54 AM »
Bingo! Heaps better ... now I'd concentrate on the shadowy replica.Move him down to road level and voila. much more realistic.  Great work
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« Reply #9 on: October 29, 2010, 05:06:07 AM »
Boy, you are a tough task master, Jenn.  Well, here it is.
 

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« Reply #10 on: October 29, 2010, 01:50:03 PM »
What do you think yourself Christoph?

Personally I think because I've seen this image evolve, that it pleases my eyes most but in saying that, we don't always have the benefit of being able to achieve the goal.

Great image
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« Reply #11 on: October 29, 2010, 06:06:33 PM »
Yes, I like it better this way too.  And, thanks Jenn for keeping at it. 

I guess I am a big picture man.  It happens too often that I don't notice the detail that could make all the difference.  I need to be more careful.  Joining this challenge has helped a lot. 

Thanks very much, everybody.  Your comments have been great and good fun.  They made me more careful when selecting what to record and how to process.  And I can still learn a lot.

Practice makes perfect!  Well, maybe not perfect but it does improve your results.  Thanks again!
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