A bit close to the wall behind with some distracting paint marks and a bit close to the flash but you were probably holding the camera. Try pointing the flash away for bounce light or difuse it with something. Great detail in the hair and you have a very photogenic face, nice self portrait.
Agree with Derek here ...The other thing with holding a camera for a self portrait is that you tend to have trouble getting the focus point right ... for a "traditional" portrait your eyes should be the main focal point of the picture.
And dont worry about the hat fetish ... Tommy has seen your underwear

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